Okay, so the next story is Date Night: Emery.
I think this is a good time for a Dizzy-style info dump in the form of a character bio, since we have those of the other girls but not of my own.
Name: Emery Deza
Age: 638 (Apparent Age: 25)
D.O.B. 4/13/746 A.E. (After Emergence) (No idea what it translates to in real life since their days and years are longer. She's probably over a millennium old in our terms.)
Emery was born in an agricultural arcology on the planet of Kennemyer. Her parents were a highly trusted red-haired, green eyed servant to the ruling council, and a black haired, slanted-eyed soldier who frequently visited the arcology for the company. It was a selective breeding assignment like most births among the lower ranks of arcology society. She spent the first 25 years of her life growing under the tutelage and care of her mother, and the various psychics who ruled the arcology. They taught her mental discipline and helped her grow into a strong woman of character.
At age 25 she left home to join the outside world. Her training had included intense physical exercise, and she soon found her calling in the Physiq class of society. She was a physical entertainer who worked her way across the Empire of the Eternal Dawn as an arena fighter, a model for sports equipment, and a porn star and prostitute. After most of a century this way, she expanded her skills to true combat and enlisted in the military to protect her people from enemies attacking from the Galaxy's core. She would spend the rest of her life bouncing between sports, war, and motherhood and she couldn't have been happier about it.
At the age of five hundred a fateful meeting would nudge her future in a new direction. At one of her tournaments she locked eyes with a spectator in the crowd. His species was rare in the greater galaxy, mostly sticking to themselves in their own little corner where they had an empire all their own. She only placed third that day, but afterward, she was introduced to her admirer and accepted an invitation to his ship. There she found out her universe was just the tip of the iceberg, and while he was visiting her universe, she struck up a deal where he would ferry her to her matches, and she would help him connect with others in her verse. Businessmen, politicians, she could meet them all.
It would be the beginning of a friendship that would lead her to joining him permanently as part of a harem of six women, the other five of which we're already very familiar with.
I'm still alive and the story's still alive. I've just been letting myself get distracted by games, and been exploring other artists' work to strengthen my own.
I haven't started Date Night Emery yet, but it's on the docket. Not gonna give a date because while I have work time in mind for it I never can tell how far I'll get in a session.
July 1, 2016
Shame the IP isn't your own, you could publish. Getting Dizzy to sign off could be possibly difficult. There are quite a few writers on partreon that are making decent supplementary income. Perhaps you can retool the stories enough to make the characters and setting your own. Then publish. I'd probably be interested in reading something like this for a 3.99 kindle edition. Not sure how or if amazon restricts content. I've seen some titles that are potentially borderline but I don't know how restrictive the kindle marketplace is.
There's other places I can go when I choose to publish. PART of the IP IS mine, mainly Hatch and the race the girls transform into. Believe me, those are staying Mine and getting worked on in the long term. You WILL see stories of a similar sort popping up, but it'll be a long haul before we get back to sci-fi because it begins in fantasy and moves forward technologically from there. I've already got a page written and some notes for making my own language. Which will mostly be a reference point for names of people and places, but I already have some vocabulary complete with pronunciation written out..
ETA: The main reason I'm not producing on Patreon is that my work is far too sporadic to put there. People pay monthly and expect monthly rewards. It's too regular for my current output. I'm working on that, but between my job and other hobby stuff, it's still very much a work in progress. Just stay tuned and we'll see where it all goes.
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