So I have tomorrow off, and my foot's injured, so I have time and motivation to do more stories like Girls will be Girls., This is a singular spot to discuss my work, like Bones has for his.
So the first order of business I guess is to do a recap of New Dawn for the people who want to get into it but don't have the time to wade through almost 80 double spaced pages of text.
New Dawn is an Alternate Universe where Omnitron has made some powerful enemies called the Templars, who surrounded Earth and demanded humanity turn over all known assets of Omnitron. Including the crew of the Andromeda. The girls, of course, took off and looked for safety elsewhere. Which they didn't find. One by one, their allies turned against them for their own sake. In one last desperate hyperspace jump, they find themselves in an abandoned system outside of known space. This is where the story starts. Cassidy notices the strongest energy readings she's ever seen in the distance, and Sasha orders the ship to investigate in the hopes of finding a new ally. Boy did they ever. His name is Hatch. He's a humanoid Sasha-sized creature covered in shimmering crimson scales and thick seams of perpetually wet pink skin. Oh, and his body burns with enough exotic radiation to make Godzilla take notice. After a short conversation and some R and R together, the girls slowly board Hatch's ship, the Imperial Dream, and use specialized medical chambers to transform themselves into a near-human race that absorbs radiation like a prom queen getting a tan. In the middle of all of this, Sasha gets a chance to talk to and negotiate with the Templars to get the price off her crew's head.
Hatch is graceful and supportive through all of this, and Sasha starts caring deeply for him. The entire crew trusts him, and each one wears a collar symbolizing her devotion to him and the cause of peace and familial harmony.
I'm working in little bits and pieces on the next story. It's slow going because we watched Farscape the Peacekeeper Wars and I needed time away from everything to wrap my head around that one. It's a doozie, even for a series finale miniseries.
The next one's another scene with the girls, though there's more of them this time. Holograms do get involved, so enjoy it when it comes out.
January 3, 2015
I am curious how the pregnancies will advance since the whole of the crew are with Hatch's children. I know it'll probably be small impact for awhile unless there's a story driven reason for them to be rapid, but at the same time I figured better to ask now than pester at each story.
Also wondering if there will be any additions to the crew and wives/pets of Hatch, since the survival of his race would best be served by as wide a genetic gene pool as possible.
I haven't actually done the math on it. Months-wise, it's a five month gestation with a two month recovery. But their days are 38 hours long and their weeks are eight days.
24 x 7 = 168 x 4 (for simplicity) = 672 x 9 = 6048 hours in a pregnancy, rounded out.
38 x 8 = 304 x 4 = 1216 x 5 = 6080 hours in a pregnancy rounded out.
So it's 32 hours slower, actually. Pretty neat that I managed that without thinking it through in advance, and that I managed to do this math without a calculator.
As for his species . . . t hey're not actually in danger. He's not repopulating anything, he's doing empire building to shore up the local area so that when, in a few thousand years, the bigger factions spread out that far into the Multiverse, they're ready. His harem might produce a massive royal family for him, but they're not rebuilding a fallen race all on their own. Besides, you wouldn't want just one father for this. On his own, Hatch wouldn't really be rebuilding his race. You need way more than one man for that.
January 3, 2015
Ooooh, gotcha, so it'll give them plenty of time to be knocked up and enjoy the effects on their bodies, veddy nice. 😀 and thanks for going through the math.
Oh right, my bad, I hadn't read the originals in a bit and forgot. Thanks for the correction and I see what you mean...still hoping for lots of breeding and plenty of play with the ladies. I have to admit I'm enjoying the various fetishes you're exploring in the date nights.
Eh, I needed to do the math for my own sake anyway. And that was rounded off at an exact four week month. So nine Februaries, If you accounted for the extra days in most human months, and kept the new calendar at a steady 32 day month, human pregnancies would be a bit longer in hours.
And yeah, there's plenty of breeding. You'll see. As for the fetishes . . . Dizzy is a master at his work, but between him and everyone else following mostly the same model for it, some of it gets a tiny bit stale. On its own I'm sure my own work would get a bit stale too eventually, but when you pair it up with Dizzy's the two complement each other.
We all know that the threads are in order of latest post, so before I go any further I think I should post a chronological order to the stories, with links, so people can keep track and read in the correct order.
Girls Will Be Girls and Date Night: Sasha:
Date Night: Sylvia and Interlude in the Spa:
Date Night: Juli and Downtime:
Date Night: Cassidy and Playing with Dolls
Date Night: Gwen and Quality Time:
Date Night: Emery
Date Night: Finale
This post will be updated as I write more stories. Ones that share a title line are concurrent in chronology, so you can read them in either order and it won't change a thing.
Okay, discussion time.
There's a couple divisive but completely legal fetishes I think I'd like to incorporate into some of the stories coming up, and I want your feedback on whether I should.
The first is DDlg, which stands for Daddy Dom little girl. From the backstories we got, Sylvia grew up without her father. That tends to leave a person vulnerable in the daddy issues department. And it's something that Hatch could use to strengthen his connection to her. She could be his little girl during dates, and since she's an adult and they're not really related, he's just filling a need she buried a long time ago. After Playing with Dolls, I doubt this one's going to be too much of an issue. You all know what I can do with this stuff. Just thought I'd put the idea out there before I wrote about it, in case there's some unforeseen Big No about it.
The second is definitely divisive as Hell: Pissing. I'm not talking about one person pissing on another. I get it as a marking territory thing, but it's not needed here. I do, however, understand why people like that fetish. There's roughly seven billion people on this planet. Some of them were bound to like the sensory properties of urine. From the inside . . . it's a build-up and release of tension. For most people it's a pleasant relief, but not a particularly erotic one. There's always some, though, who pretty much treat it as a miniature orgasm. If I don't get a big nay on this one, it's probably factoring into Gwen's date night.
So discuss amongst yourselves this week, and whatever comes of it, you'll see in the future.
August 26, 2014
sorry i forgot to express my opinion to it
the daddy thing I find very strange
and the other thing I find any kind of fecal sex disgusting its never my fetish especially i dont will see Dizzys girl do that or read from that ( even if it 's all about pee i know evry one must do it its ok but i dont want to know that )
sorry mabye it a little hard but i think so its my express
Aha! Finally somebody says something. Yeah, definitely doing a poll next time.
Heck, I'll edit it this time. I'm off today and Wednesday. I'll edit this place with a poll for the pissing stuff and see where the group lies in a couple days. I do have that section of the Gwen story written, but I like writing these stories, so having to double back and redo it as something else doesn't bother me.
ETA: I guess you have to do the poll right when you start the topic. From now on when I do a new story that's going to possibly involve weird (for us) stuff, I'll pre-create the thread and the title and stick a poll up to make sure of everyone's take. In the meantime there's chores I can get done around the house, and I can give y'all extra days to speak your mind here.
None taken. No one thing is for everyone. To be fair, appearance wise it's not really a transformation. They look the same. The changes are: 1. Adaptations to survive in what, to a normal;human, would be a very hostile environment. Think something like Fallout just after the bombs dropped. 2. Internal adaptations for a somewhat different style of reproduction. I won't jump into that and spoil it for you. and 3. Surface nerve work to add in more sensitive areas on the hands, feet, breasts. Places like that.
It's a bit more of a change to them than Dizzy's setting did to normal humans, but it's not harmful to them.
And yeah, I'm not doing those two. I don't think I'll get farther off track than I've already done.
Yeah, I know that every change in your story is not visible. The fact itself is disturbing. I'm not against transformation entirely, I'm ok with male transformations(especially if he is a shape-shifter of some kind, that would be natural). I'm against body transformations with female characters.
I'm well aware of the changes modern humans have in Dizzy-verse. On thing is backstory, and the other - when when the change is hapoening before your very eyes, roughly speaking.
Still, I"ll read your story! I'm starving for anything related to Dizzy-verse. xD
Actually, I admire and a little envy you. You did an amazingly great job in writing Dizzy-verse fanfiction. So many good quality chapters! After a year and half I still have just parts of different charters of my own series... =.=
If you need help, don't hesitate to drop me a line.
I spent three years in college training to write (the first year was spent on biology and chemistry). I feel headfirst in love with multiverses to the point where I'm really having a hard time finding a good starting point/verse to actually write my stuff in. But I'm equally in love with Dizzy's girls, so I managed to pull this stuff off in a relatively short time.
There's more stories coming. The next one's a Sasha/Cassidy pairing. I just have to get a clear day with nothing else going on. I managed a page and a half last week, but I realized it was sloppy and rushing into things and I just needed more time for the ideas to percolate and come out clean. That's how it works for me. I jump in and get something down, it generally sucks, but it's a hook for the greater idea. Then I spend a week, or a month, working my RL job and letting stuff simmer in the back of my mind. Then I get a clear day, and . . .
After the post-writing edit phase, what you see is the result.
ETA: You're not an ass. Everyone's got their own tastes. I'm just trying to mitigate some of the turn-off here.
I COULD have gone full-bore alternate universe and recreated the group as a naturally existing member of that species from the start. It certainly would have been a sight to see.
FETA: Also, thank you for the compliments. I do this for the fans, including yourself. Well, I write it for myself to work out my own feelings, but I post it for all of you.
Well... if you can buy me a ticket to Kamino or I dunno... create me a pocket dimension where time does not exist but I can still move and do things freely... yep, that would help. xD
I don't really have any trouble with writing things or translating(because English is not my native language). My problem is the lack of time - full-time job, university, RL and a ton or so non-porn fiction stories. And some times I'm just a lazy ass... but hey, thanks! I really appreciate that,
At first I thought that you mean re-crating Dizzy team as non-modified humans, which is somewhat interesting too, but now I understand what you mean xD
Hey, don't mention it. It's only natural to praise someone's good work and writing skills.
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